Colorful Prose

June 18th, 2007 by

dani

She raises her head
and parts her silky lips to
receive the sky’s kiss

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13 Responses

Neil Says:
June 18th, 2007 at 10:42 pm
Very evocative, especially on a beautiful day like today.
dani Says:
June 19th, 2007 at 6:50 am
Thanks Neil, I was going for that Georgia O’Keefe feeling.
Regina Clare Jane Says:
June 20th, 2007 at 12:08 am
Oh, very pretty hibiscus!
jem Says:
June 20th, 2007 at 11:38 am
Very sensual! Flowers seem inherently feminine to me.
plain foolish Says:
June 20th, 2007 at 3:31 pm
Wow. I love the image of the kiss. Just beautiful.
Sandy Says:
June 20th, 2007 at 10:09 pm
Very Nice! The expression of the summer season.
the heartful blogger Says:
June 21st, 2007 at 1:23 pm
gorgeous and summery, wonderful
Jemima Says:
June 21st, 2007 at 9:36 pm
sensual
Nina Says:
June 21st, 2007 at 9:44 pm
Beautiful…

I love “parts her silky lips”
warillever Says:
June 22nd, 2007 at 2:13 am
nice
Patois Says:
June 22nd, 2007 at 9:41 pm
How enticing and alluring your words are!
Clare Says:
June 23rd, 2007 at 6:52 am
Wonderful image of the flower receiving the sky’s kiss! Such a lovely and alive passion — both the sky and the flower are living and dynamic beings interacting. Very cool.
JanePoe (aka Deborah) Says:
June 28th, 2007 at 8:00 am
Georgia O’Keefe … you nailed it! Brilliant ‘ku. xx, JP