Colorful Prose

July 11th, 2007 by

dani

Day’s first light erupts
in chirps, coos, caws and cackles
nature’s alarm clock

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8 Responses

AnnieElf Says:
July 11th, 2007 at 4:03 am
The joke about the roster disturbing neighbors too early is alive and well at the house behind me. I have never minded though. The roster’s call in the morning, joined with other birds is a great way to greet the day.
Patricia (a/k/a Roswila) Says:
July 11th, 2007 at 4:25 am
Oh, yes, quite an alarm clock, aren’t they? Nice haiku.
Tumblewords Says:
July 11th, 2007 at 5:18 am
I loved this one. I’ll keep it in mind when that early morning noise wakes me before I’m ready!
Clare Says:
July 11th, 2007 at 6:04 am
Wonderful sounds created in your haiku with the “chirps, coos, caws and cackles” — I loved this! And what a perfect way to wake up.
Crafty Green Poet Says:
July 11th, 2007 at 8:41 am
I love the dawn chorus!
impressions along the way Says:
July 11th, 2007 at 12:02 pm
So true!! I love the alliteration of the chirps, coos, caws and cackles.
jem Says:
July 12th, 2007 at 7:56 pm
Well caught. Its good to think about the sounds as well as the sights that birds inspire.
Sandy Says:
July 12th, 2007 at 9:52 pm
I just love the way your haiku sounds!