Colorful Prose

August 21st, 2007 by

dani

with ashen daylight
dawn erases from my dreams
the last wisps of you

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9 Responses

Clare Says:
August 21st, 2007 at 7:20 pm
lovely! the line “the last wisps of you” is an incredible description — and it’s how it feels to me when I dream of someone who is gone and then wake up.
Crafty Green Poet Says:
August 21st, 2007 at 8:18 pm
so melancholy this one
Becca Says:
August 22nd, 2007 at 2:44 am
So poignant and very beautiful.
“last wisps of you” is a gorgeous line.
Marcia (MeeAugraphie) Says:
August 22nd, 2007 at 7:39 am
“Dawn erases from my dreams/the last wisps of you” is just shy of haunting. I love it.
Tumblewords Says:
August 22nd, 2007 at 11:46 pm
ashen daylight - a poignant concept - nicely done!
Megan Says:
August 23rd, 2007 at 8:07 am
this one tugs at my heart…it’s beautiful!
Quietpaths Says:
August 23rd, 2007 at 11:40 pm
Yes, this speaks to me… thanks for sharing it.
patois Says:
August 24th, 2007 at 6:59 am
I do feel very sad reading this. Perhaps I’m just getting weepier in my old age. But it appears that it grabs everyone who read it. Very beautiful indeed.
Dani Says:
August 24th, 2007 at 10:38 am
I agree, it is very lonely. That’s where I’m writing from lately.