Colorful Prose

October 22nd, 2007 by dani

to be as close as
the breath warmed by your lungs and
the tears in your eyes

*****

Eyes can no longer
focus on the big picture
when we are too close

*****

even far away
I am as close as your heart
if you look within

*****

More “closeness” haiku at One Deep Breath.

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7 Responses

  1. Jemima Says:

    I can feel the breath on my face :-)

  2. Sandy Says:

    Three very lovely poems. Thanks!

  3. greggo Says:

    beautiful sentiment in all three of these!

  4. Tumblewords Says:

    Beautiful! Absolutely.

  5. Crafty Green Poet Says:

    Lovely selection, very true too

  6. spacedlaw Says:

    Lovely feelings

  7. qualcosa di bello Says:

    i am especially fond of the second…maybe because it is something i must tell myself frequently

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