dani
to be as close as
the breath warmed by your lungs and
the tears in your eyes
*****
Eyes can no longer
focus on the big picture
when we are too close
*****
even far away
I am as close as your heart
if you look within
*****
More “closeness” haiku at One Deep Breath.
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October 22nd, 2007 at 10:09 pm
I can feel the breath on my face
October 22nd, 2007 at 10:22 pm
Three very lovely poems. Thanks!
October 23rd, 2007 at 4:36 am
beautiful sentiment in all three of these!
October 23rd, 2007 at 4:49 am
Beautiful! Absolutely.
October 23rd, 2007 at 8:42 am
Lovely selection, very true too
October 23rd, 2007 at 9:15 am
Lovely feelings
October 23rd, 2007 at 8:58 pm
i am especially fond of the second…maybe because it is something i must tell myself frequently