November 27th, 2007 by 
dani
no more room for me
the pebble lodged between us
became a boulder
*****
pebble in a pond
rings ricochet and disperse
then stillness returns
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November 27th, 2007 by dani
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November 28th, 2007 at 3:32 pm
If pebble grows
maybe it’s clay
rain will eat away
November 28th, 2007 at 6:04 pm
very profound twist on the prompt
November 28th, 2007 at 9:14 pm
Thanks, Pearl, for your insight.
November 29th, 2007 at 11:03 pm
I am glad you posted these again. I had not read them before and even if I had they are worth revisiting again and again. The first makes me want to call out….there is always room for you…this is a vast universe and you in your spaciousness are prescious.
jodi barone
November 30th, 2007 at 8:29 pm
i can relate. thanks for posting this.
bes