Belonging haiku
November 12th, 2007 by 
dani
uprooted
transplanted to a place
I don’t belong
*****
how hard it is to
want to belong to someone
who doesn’t want you
More “belonging” haiku at One Deep Breath.
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15 Comments »
November 12th, 2007 at 11:58 pm
Ah, these are nice, yearning and non-belonging…well-written!
November 13th, 2007 at 1:35 am
I love them both!
November 13th, 2007 at 5:19 am
its not hard… it is impossible…..
November 13th, 2007 at 9:08 am
How sad these are.
Moving.
November 13th, 2007 at 9:48 am
these are sad and lonely…
November 13th, 2007 at 1:32 pm
Both are very good!
November 13th, 2007 at 1:58 pm
Its good to read someone writing about not always belonging. Its easy with these prompts to take the positive interpretation and miss the flip side. The last one is really good – making me remember that many components have to come together for belonging to work.
November 13th, 2007 at 3:56 pm
the not-so-happy side of a sense of belonging (or longing to belong). they are both so full of a beautiful sadness.
November 13th, 2007 at 8:30 pm
In my youth, there were a handful of experiences when that “wanting” you so truthfully wrote of was a place I called home. Your haiku was important for me to read. This moment. . .a healing. Thank you for writing it!!!
November 14th, 2007 at 11:49 pm
Your words touched my heart, and you beautifully captured the sadness and ache of wanting to belong.
November 15th, 2007 at 3:26 pm
These are both so sad.
November 15th, 2007 at 7:17 pm
These are very hard on the heart. Beautifully done.
November 15th, 2007 at 9:52 pm
ohh, i really loved those!
November 16th, 2007 at 2:14 am
Those were written with excellence!
November 18th, 2007 at 5:05 pm
true