Colorful Haiku
dani
Children’s laughter floats
like smoke from birthday candles
and lofty balloons.
*****
Bright
leaves
release
their branches,
fly with a flourish,
then come to rest. What an exit!
*****
My brother, his son
chocolate against milky white
Love has no color.
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February 26th, 2007 at 9:58 pm
These are all fabulous - and I love the colourful photo! I especially like the last line of your third poem - wise words.
February 28th, 2007 at 4:48 am
These are wonderful ways to look at color in our lives! Nicely done
February 28th, 2007 at 7:03 am
The colors are beautiful in a world that sometimes see black and white. I particular love the last one, the identity of who I am.
February 28th, 2007 at 7:31 am
All three of your haiku are truly colorful and beautiful!
February 28th, 2007 at 10:13 am
I love the movement in your fib and the wisdom in your last haiku.
February 28th, 2007 at 12:14 pm
Wonderful poems that take us the length of a party. Innocent children just having fun.
February 28th, 2007 at 2:52 pm
I love them all!!
The third one is my favorite.
February 28th, 2007 at 7:36 pm
I am really enjoying this haiku on color! The last one is so true…
February 28th, 2007 at 10:15 pm
Dani,
The color of love is you.
Beautiful tender poems of life appreciated. Nice
rel
March 1st, 2007 at 7:23 pm
I think the last Haiku is just fantastic. You couldn’t have put it any better!