Common Ground 2
dani
Babel’s descendents
condemned to find common ground
through body language
***
no more room for me
the pebble lodged between us
became a boulder
Posted in Haiku |
dani
Babel’s descendents
condemned to find common ground
through body language
***
no more room for me
the pebble lodged between us
became a boulder
Posted in Haiku |
May 30th, 2007 at 6:56 pm
very insightful and the second one leaves a lot of room for the reader to wonder what if the two characters had moved the pebble when it was still a pebble?.