Crystalized
February 3rd, 2008 by 
dani
You say I don’t talk, don’t share,
feelings frozen over, in hibernation,
hermetic as the laden ice-covered branches
cutting you off from the core of who I am.
But the cold and slippery truth is
if I melt these icicles and
stand before you, naked and trembling,
I no longer could pretend to be your ideal,
conform to your projection of perfection,
and your rejection is more than I could bear.
I would become so very weightless and inconsequential
that you could blow me away
simply by the sigh of your indifference
like a snowflake in the wind and bitter cold,
disoriented and adrift in engulfing whiteness,
lost, like a million others.
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4 Comments »
February 5th, 2008 at 8:18 am
This is very good.
February 7th, 2008 at 6:06 pm
very well written, you have “crystalized” the imagery so well in the prose that each description becomes a pic in itself. Well done!
April 18th, 2009 at 6:14 pm
It bears more than one meaning and one image. I like it!!
September 4th, 2010 at 10:06 am
amazing
it depicts the real fear within us that tolet go our own image created by us