Earth Day Haiku
dani
earth
air
fire
and water
if love is the fifth
just maybe we still have a chance
***
tears fall from the sky
to grow crops and quench our thirst
a pure flowing gift
***
degree by degree
climate change? so what? why change?
no one’s left to say
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April 23rd, 2007 at 10:26 pm
Good ideas, and that first one, may be right!
April 24th, 2007 at 2:25 pm
I *love* the first fib.
April 24th, 2007 at 3:09 pm
Just maybe, Dani…
April 24th, 2007 at 6:18 pm
Yes, your first says it. May we have a chance…
April 25th, 2007 at 3:55 am
These all are thought-inspiring. I like the first very much. Thank you for all three.
April 25th, 2007 at 4:44 am
All of them are marvelous. I, too, like the first best. Calls to mind in me John Lennon.
April 25th, 2007 at 9:06 am
Thought provoking selection, hopefully your first is true.
April 25th, 2007 at 4:07 pm
Powerful and moving. Great job!
April 25th, 2007 at 7:55 pm
I liked all three, but the last one is beautifully melancholy, just right. Thankyou
April 26th, 2007 at 1:31 pm
Love’s the first element, the underlying prime.
April 27th, 2007 at 1:27 am
I enjoyed them all but the second is my favorite.