Comments on: Inanimate Things

By: Mike McCulley

Mike McCulley — Sun, 07 Oct 2007 14:03:48 +0000

Tiel Aisha Ansari and I, Mike McCulley, have created a 'poetry exchange' blog at Totally Optional Prompts , and you are invited to participate.

By: Jeannine

Jeannine — Thu, 19 Apr 2007 19:41:29 +0000

This is beautiful! Truly a tapestry of great lines. Wow!

(And – eeep! – so glad to see one of my lines used in a new way).

By: Robin (Capitulation)

Robin (Capitulation) — Sat, 14 Apr 2007 17:47:52 +0000

Seamlessly woven! Excellent. I used many lines, too, but came up with a different viewpoint. How interesting. This was very fun!

By: fragmentsinsight

fragmentsinsight — Sat, 14 Apr 2007 11:52:38 +0000

Absolutely splendid. This reads like a wonderful story. I would never have guessed it is actually a merging of many different lines. You sculpted it into a beautiful poem.

By: Paris Parfait

Paris Parfait — Fri, 13 Apr 2007 15:39:07 +0000

Beautiful poem, Dani. Well done, you!

By: Sara

Sara — Fri, 13 Apr 2007 15:05:23 +0000

I loved seeing my line in this remarkable poem.

The part I liked the best was the way you used the sentence

from the hard work of making other people happy

That so reminds me of my grandfather.

By: madd

madd — Fri, 13 Apr 2007 14:03:10 +0000

lolol..as you can see I was rushing when I left my comment..but I think you get the gist of it even with all the typos..am visiting friends this weekend and using their computer..why is it we get so comfy with ours and feel so strange on anothers,,oh well just one of lifes silly questions there is not answer to …m

By: madd

madd — Fri, 13 Apr 2007 13:59:56 +0000

Thanks for the visit and the and your warm comment..you had such a wonderful line I couldn’t resist. I love your writing..I have so little time lately to visit and leave comments, work being the all consuming black hole that it is..too many projects too little time..:) I usually am a lurker flitting from site to site late at nite, kin of like a warm glasd of mikl, just had to stop by and say hi..when I saw your line the words were just there so thanks for the burst of inspiration..take care..m

By: meredith

meredith — Fri, 13 Apr 2007 11:50:53 +0000

This was fun to read, once not knowing how you composed it, and then again after finding out.

By: ...deb

...deb — Fri, 13 Apr 2007 04:10:42 +0000

What you wove with the (24!) lines was a tapestry of depth and beauty. And that rest stop was definitely dynamic. You are a heck of a maestro.