Colorful Prose

inky haiku

February 25th, 2008 by

dani

indigo liquid
aimed at a page through a point
traces on fingers

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Andrée Says:
February 26th, 2008 at 3:05 am
There are traces on fingers, aren’t there? I really like this haiku: it is visual for me, actually.

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Tumblewords Says:
February 26th, 2008 at 3:47 am
I love the traces on fingers… so true - lovely haiku!
Crafty Green Poet Says:
February 26th, 2008 at 9:43 am
very true!
jem Says:
February 26th, 2008 at 12:32 pm
I like this one - I can relate to it I like the image of the middle line especially, almost like words are darts and only some hit their target.
qualcosa di bello Says:
February 26th, 2008 at 12:38 pm
i like the idea of aiming at a point
SandyCarlson Says:
February 26th, 2008 at 12:43 pm
I can relate to this, too. The engagement of our thoughts with the page is exactly this.
paisley Says:
February 26th, 2008 at 11:31 pm
when i read this it comes off with the precision of the ballet movement “en pointe” for some reason… i love it…
spacedlaw Says:
February 27th, 2008 at 7:44 pm
This reminded me of how I learned to write with a nib as a child.
Great.