Comments on: inky haiku

By: spacedlaw

spacedlaw — Wed, 27 Feb 2008 18:44:28 +0000

This reminded me of how I learned to write with a nib as a child.
Great.

By: paisley

paisley — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 22:31:20 +0000

when i read this it comes off with the precision of the ballet movement “en pointe” for some reason… i love it…

By: SandyCarlson

SandyCarlson — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 11:43:31 +0000

I can relate to this, too. The engagement of our thoughts with the page is exactly this.

By: qualcosa di bello

qualcosa di bello — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 11:38:13 +0000

i like the idea of aiming at a point

By: jem

jem — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 11:32:18 +0000

I like this one – I can relate to it I like the image of the middle line especially, almost like words are darts and only some hit their target.

By: Crafty Green Poet

Crafty Green Poet — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 08:43:12 +0000

very true!

By: Tumblewords

Tumblewords — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 02:47:06 +0000

I love the traces on fingers… so true – lovely haiku!

By: Andrée

Andrée — Tue, 26 Feb 2008 02:05:35 +0000

There are traces on fingers, aren't there? I really like this haiku: it is visual for me, actually. Sandy and I are continuing the tradition of One Deep Breath at One Single Impression. If you would like, we will add you to the blogroll immediately. Thank you.