Intertwined
October 11th, 2007 by 
dani
Together is
the salty taste of our sweat mingling
bodies pressed so tightly I no longer know
where I stop and you begin
arms and legs intertwined
hearts inseparable
a dream
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October 11th, 2007 by dani
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October 11th, 2007 at 7:14 pm
and some day you will realize that even tho the physical aspect is gone,, together is very much a place in the heart…..
great take on the prompt….
October 11th, 2007 at 7:37 pm
Loved it! You said alot in those few lines.
October 11th, 2007 at 7:37 pm
lingers…long after…
October 11th, 2007 at 8:17 pm
Sweet, gentle and sensuous!
October 11th, 2007 at 9:18 pm
Wow. “Together is…a dream” with that amazing longing between. Great prompt response.
October 12th, 2007 at 12:39 am
I like the way this poem opens,
October 12th, 2007 at 6:38 pm
dream can be interpreted in different ways, nice touch of ambiguity at the end
October 13th, 2007 at 10:22 pm
Sweet and salty — great combo!
