Colorful Prose

Letting change in

October 29th, 2007 by

dani

wound up in worries
a self-imposed straight-jacket
butterfly unfurls

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8 Responses

barone Says:
October 30th, 2007 at 12:44 am
Lovely, pratayahara, withdrawal of the senses nourishing the soul. Barone
Abby Says:
October 30th, 2007 at 3:27 am
Really interesting, I was not expecting the last line.
Patricia (a/k/a Roswila) Says:
October 30th, 2007 at 3:32 am
Love the release of that third line. A pleasant surprise, and a visually inviting one, too.
Clare Says:
October 30th, 2007 at 5:58 am
This is so incredibly beautiful — one of the best haiku I’ve ever read, and I really mean that.
Crafty Green Poet Says:
October 30th, 2007 at 9:50 am
beautiful and very true
greggo Says:
October 30th, 2007 at 7:15 pm
that’s simply wonderful!
coconutannies Says:
October 31st, 2007 at 3:41 am
So true! So beautiful!
patois Says:
November 1st, 2007 at 8:03 pm
A lovely ending. I was going in another direction, and that butterfly unfurling was a lovely surprise.

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