Colorful Prose

Ode (or Owed) to Meredith

May 17th, 2007 by dani

It’s like this:
We’re at a party with a dress code of tuxes and fancy skirts
and we’re the only ones wearing jeans and T-shirts.
Two Americans blundering through life in France,
brought here by our weakness for romance,
can’t help but gravitate towards each other.
We keep sane only by complaining to one another.

We each try to raise two Franco-American kids,
making sure they know about peanut butter and Cheez Wiz,
Although we’ve adapted well to the French art of aperitif,
commiserating about the elections brings little relief.
Despite her great talent for playing the trombone,
I have an evil desire to steal her garden gnome.

She’s my rabbit sitter. I’m her goldfish guardian.
At Thanksgiving, we find time to share all things American.
We’ll never be truly from here.
We feel like outsiders there.
She helps me take life less seriously
and makes me laugh so hard I have to pee!

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11 Responses

  1. Rob Kistner Says:

    Great read Dani — Id love to be a “free man in Paris, unfettered and alive” :)

  2. meredith Says:

    I about choked when I saw the title…
    1. I had just sipped a gulp of diet coke
    2. I was talking on the phone and blog hopping at the same time.
    My dear friend, we must get together, it’s riduculous to live in the same town and not see eachother.
    That’s the best rhyming poem I have read in a long time, even if I am a little biased!

  3. Regina Clare Jane Says:

    Oh, it’s great to have friends you can commiserate with!
    I didn’t know you lived in France!

  4. Lisa Says:

    I enjoyed your poem. You’re just adding some American flare to France - sounds like fun.

  5. Paris Parfait Says:

    Very cute - and a great description of living here and there. I didn’t know you lived near Meredith - how wonderful that you two can commiserate/ share the fun!

  6. Jessica Says:

    This is very touching — nice work!

  7. gautami Says:

    Rhyming pattern is very good. It was good to read this poem. There are so many cutelines in there.

  8. ...deb Says:

    I was completely tickled (especially) by rhyming garden gnomes with trombones.

  9. Clare Says:

    I really enjoyed this! Terrific visual descriptions.

  10. Crafty Green Poet Says:

    Deb just stole my line - I really liked the gnomes / trombones rhyme!

  11. chicklegirl Says:

    Nice job of capturing the essence of friendship. I think my favorite part is “can’t help but gravitate towards each other/We keep sane only by complaining to one another.”

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