simple pleasure
October 7th, 2007 by 
dani
scent of thyme and pine
kicked up from the underbrush
walking down life’s path
***
a bubbly bath
soaking out tensions with some
chocolate and champagne
More simple pleasures at One Deep Breath.
Posted in Haiku | 
October 7th, 2007 at 10:10 pm
what a very peaceful scene you have painted. beautiful!
October 7th, 2007 at 10:39 pm
Really nice. I love how thyme echos “time…”
October 8th, 2007 at 10:31 am
That last one wasn’t so simple…
October 8th, 2007 at 11:05 am
I love the first one, very evocative.
October 8th, 2007 at 1:06 pm
Yes the first is wonderful.
October 8th, 2007 at 2:26 pm
oh i loved the second one.. what luxury!!!!!!
October 8th, 2007 at 5:20 pm
Love ‘kicked up from the underbrush’ — lots of good things found this way. champagne,chocalate and bubblebath are my recipe for heaven. thanks. jodi wildvines.blogspot.com
October 8th, 2007 at 5:47 pm
These are greatly pleasure-full! Wonderful words and images.
October 8th, 2007 at 6:21 pm
I love both your haiku; the images are so vivid. I would love to be able to take a bubble bath!
October 8th, 2007 at 9:20 pm
That path sounds like a good place to be traveling.
October 9th, 2007 at 12:56 am
These sound like delicious pleasures!
October 9th, 2007 at 6:42 am
Your haiku are wonderful and are a feast for the senses!
October 11th, 2007 at 2:59 am
champagne and chocolate - pure pleasure!
October 12th, 2007 at 12:53 am
You’ve evoked such a powerful scent for me in the first one. Thank you.
October 15th, 2007 at 2:41 am
scent is such a powerful thing…very beautiful capture of that idea.