Colorful Prose

Sunday Morning

February 28th, 2007 by dani

Sunday morning sneaks into my bed
with hurried steps muffled by footy pyjamas.
Two warm bodies still smelling of dreams,
of innocence, burrow under the covers,
each cuddling into the warmth and reassurance
found beneath a protective wing and good-morning kisses.
Eyes still shut against an undecided day,
hearing only our breathing in unison—my favorite moment—
melded together, like before they were born.
Then sleep is chased away. Yawns are replaced by giggles.
Words are whispered and spirits ignite.
It is a morning of blanket tents and tickles.

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20 Responses

  1. Brian Says:

    I love it. Such a wonderful poem about children and unconditional love.

  2. Nia Says:

    It’s beautiful!

  3. Chris Says:

    I did not read this as children at all but on the re-read it could be. I thought lovers. This is so beautiful.

  4. Crafty Green Poet Says:

    I love the line ’smelling of dreams’

  5. pepektheassassin Says:

    Lovely poem! (But what ARE those little icon thingys anyway?)

  6. rel Says:

    dani
    What a beautiful way to greet the day.
    rel

  7. Natalie Says:

    Reading this has really warmed my heart. Such lovely images, thank you.

  8. Robin Says:

    Delightful! I loved the line: “Eyes still shut against an undecided day,” That’s the time of magic!

  9. Sara Says:

    Very sweet. It paints a scene that makes me smile.

  10. Regina Clare Jane Says:

    I loved tents and tickles- I wish I could remember if I did that with my parents- crawling into bed to be with them…
    This was just so wonderful…

  11. gautami Says:

    I was tickled by this poem. Children bring us so much pleasure…

    gautami
    Parallel Streams

  12. dani Says:

    Pepek-
    Those little icon thingies let you submit an article directly to various social bookmarking sites (like Digg or Blogmemes, for example). Good old Wikipedia explains it best:
    “The Social bookmarking sites are a popular way to store, classify, share and search links through the practice of folksonomy techniques on the Internet or Intranet.”
    Basically, when you think something on the web is cool, you can post it on these services to share with others.

  13. Jessica Says:

    I love how concrete this poem is… while you never name the subject, it is so clear and easy to envision.

  14. Patti Says:

    This is a familiar memory for me, a typical Sunday morning. So many great lines. A great poem.

  15. Emily Says:

    I like this a lot, the clarity. I especially liked your first line–Sunday morning sneaked into my bed. Very nice.

  16. Rav`N Says:

    such a pretty, chearful poem about your children climbing into bed with you in the morning. it made me smile

  17. fragmentsinsight Says:

    Oh this is beautiful, warm like the sun and a loving embrace. Brings back welcome memories.

  18. wrchili Says:

    Wonderful poem! It evokes such happy images in my mind.

  19. Jone Says:

    I can just see this. What a loving poem. It took me awhile as well.

  20. Chickadee Chatter Says:

    Wonderful! I love the “still smelling of dreams” line.

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