Colorful Prose

The Power of a Smile

February 4th, 2007 by dani

My basement apartment
looks out onto the sidewalk
at street level.
I watch as shoes parade in front of a
fragile and solitary daisy,
leaving behind only echoes
like a metronome.

Shiny black dress shoes glint and scissor
through the air, below hovering
pinstriped suits, perfectly pressed.
Red high-heels delicately navigate,
avoiding the holes in the grates.
Colorful sneakers peek their noses out
from under too-long jeans.
Beat-up oxfords amble and loiter.
Solid boots. Unmemorable mocassins.
Even dogs’ paws and claws
click against the pavement
into the gutter
And more…

But only one little pair
of pink patent leathers
notices me as she leans down
to smell the daisy.
She makes me, barefoot,
exist with her smile.

The flower still grows,
undaunted,
in a crack in the cement.

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Posted in Poetry | 10 Comments »

10 Responses

  1. Tiel Aisha Ansari Says:

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  2. Crafty Green Poet Says:

    This is wonderful. I love seeing things from a different perspective!

  3. Christina Says:

    I love the perspective from the eye of the daisy. Magical. Sweet.

  4. Paris Parfait Says:

    Lovely poem – reminds me of a basement apartment I had briefly in London. I especially like your last stanza…the pink patent leather shoes… and the idea that a flower can shatter stone (I wrote a poem about this theme once).

  5. Regina Clare Jane Says:

    I loved this- it was just so sweet! It’s all about perspectives sometimes…

  6. ...deb Says:

    I think it’s great how clear you are on the subject: it’s the shoes that smile! Lovely perspective.

  7. KG Says:

    This really made me smile! There is something so fun about the image of being at shoe level, and drawing character traits out of what is walking by.

    The basement apartment has an interesting vantage point, not to be discounted… ;)

  8. chicklegirl Says:

    I love poems about shoes, and this was great! Each pair clearly characterized a different personality. Well done.

  9. Joe Felso Says:

    I love the premise for the poem and the pace of its imagery, like the scissoring legs walking by until one lovely face appears to match the daisy and your own bare feet become real.

  10. Ashwathy Nair Says:

    Written from such a fine perspective. I love this poem!!

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