Comments on: The Power of a Smile http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/ Just writing Thu, 10 Sep 2009 20:53:28 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Ashwathy Nair http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/comment-page-1/#comment-1749 Ashwathy Nair Tue, 12 Jun 2007 02:10:10 +0000 http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/#comment-1749 Written from such a fine perspective. I love this poem!! Written from such a fine perspective. I love this poem!!

]]> By: Joe Felso http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/comment-page-1/#comment-1742 Joe Felso Mon, 11 Jun 2007 12:43:12 +0000 http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/#comment-1742 I love the premise for the poem and the pace of its imagery, like the scissoring legs walking by until one lovely face appears to match the daisy and your own bare feet become real. I love the premise for the poem and the pace of its imagery, like the scissoring legs walking by until one lovely face appears to match the daisy and your own bare feet become real.

]]> By: chicklegirl http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/comment-page-1/#comment-1721 chicklegirl Fri, 08 Jun 2007 15:57:08 +0000 http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/#comment-1721 I love poems about shoes, and this was great! Each pair clearly characterized a different personality. Well done. I love poems about shoes, and this was great! Each pair clearly characterized a different personality. Well done.

]]> By: KG http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/comment-page-1/#comment-1719 KG Fri, 08 Jun 2007 05:32:13 +0000 http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/#comment-1719 This really made me smile! There is something so fun about the image of being at shoe level, and drawing character traits out of what is walking by. The basement apartment has an interesting vantage point, not to be discounted... ;) This really made me smile! There is something so fun about the image of being at shoe level, and drawing character traits out of what is walking by.

The basement apartment has an interesting vantage point, not to be discounted… ;)

]]> By: ...deb http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/comment-page-1/#comment-1717 ...deb Fri, 08 Jun 2007 00:04:41 +0000 http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/#comment-1717 I think it's great how clear you are on the subject: it's the shoes that smile! Lovely perspective. I think it’s great how clear you are on the subject: it’s the shoes that smile! Lovely perspective.

]]> By: Regina Clare Jane http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/comment-page-1/#comment-1716 Regina Clare Jane Thu, 07 Jun 2007 23:10:04 +0000 http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/#comment-1716 I loved this- it was just so sweet! It's all about perspectives sometimes... I loved this- it was just so sweet! It’s all about perspectives sometimes…

]]> By: Paris Parfait http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/comment-page-1/#comment-1715 Paris Parfait Thu, 07 Jun 2007 21:59:15 +0000 http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/#comment-1715 Lovely poem - reminds me of a basement apartment I had briefly in London. I especially like your last stanza...the pink patent leather shoes... and the idea that a flower can shatter stone (I wrote a poem about this theme once). Lovely poem – reminds me of a basement apartment I had briefly in London. I especially like your last stanza…the pink patent leather shoes… and the idea that a flower can shatter stone (I wrote a poem about this theme once).

]]> By: Christina http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/comment-page-1/#comment-1714 Christina Thu, 07 Jun 2007 20:42:59 +0000 http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/#comment-1714 I love the perspective from the eye of the daisy. Magical. Sweet. I love the perspective from the eye of the daisy. Magical. Sweet.

]]> By: Crafty Green Poet http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/comment-page-1/#comment-1712 Crafty Green Poet Thu, 07 Jun 2007 13:48:10 +0000 http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/#comment-1712 This is wonderful. I love seeing things from a different perspective! This is wonderful. I love seeing things from a different perspective!

]]> By: Tiel Aisha Ansari http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/comment-page-1/#comment-895 Tiel Aisha Ansari Sun, 15 Apr 2007 04:23:03 +0000 http://colorful-prose.com/the-power-of-a-smile/#comment-895 Hi! The carnival is up at <a href="knockingfrominside.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Knocking From Inside</a>! Come check it out. Hi!

The carnival is up at Knocking From Inside! Come check it out.

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