Colorful Prose

Walking Pace

January 2nd, 2007 by dani

My brow is furrowed
and my white-knuckled hands
wring the steering wheel
as I make a mental inventory
of chores awaiting me
at the end of my evening commute:

Pick up the kids.
Bring the little one to the doctor’s–
she’s got an ear infection again.
Use magic to shape a meal from left-overs.
Find the least-wrinkled clothes to wear tomorrow…

Speeding past in my red turbo,
I catch just a glimpse of him
on his sputtering and dilapidated tractor,
wheels turning at a walking pace.
It must be forty years old.
He must be seventy.

His face is ploughed through with age,
though the lines are not as straight
as those of his plantation.
His cloudy eyes peer through the bottle-ends
of his dark-rimmed glasses.
His knotted fingers, twisted vines,
rest gently on the wheel
and let the clunky old machine drive itself
between the familiar fields
of its past, present and future.

And even though he flashes
through my line of vision
for only a moment,
I am sure that the crescent
between his ruddy cheeks
is contentment.

I take my foot off the pedal
and slow to a walking pace.

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Posted in Poetry | 4 Comments »

4 Responses

  1. Regina Clare Jane Says:

    This was just so nice- a reminder to slow down, to take it all in… I loved this line- “I am sure that the crescent
    between his ruddy cheeks
    is contentment.”
    would we could all have that contentment these days…
    Thanks for a lovely little poem.

  2. twilightspider Says:

    This is so lovely. Your imagery is so well drawn – the old man described so tenderly.

    I must save this in my brain for revisiting – especially during my evening commute.

  3. gautami Says:

    Thanks. This tells us to slow down and observe people, places and taking stock. I like this. I could visualise him.

  4. Crafty Green Poet Says:

    Ah yes, slow down, take time to enjoy and to just be…. A nice reminder, thanks

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